Kindly submitted by a punctuation teacher:
True, true... some... punctuation errors are present... ahhh... along with an incomplete sentence, misuse of capitalizations, the occasional dropped apostrophes (that is plural, though), and perhaps the odd absent period... BUT - the impact! I mean... I was moved.
Honestly, I wept but not for the context; it was more for the future.
I'll bet you he's a public educator.